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Post by naito-kun on Jan 4, 2007 13:02:26 GMT -5
this my FIRST fanfic it's not the greatest ( if you want to be in just pm me) CHAPTER 1 THE LONELY EEVEE It was nice under the Oran tree, the sun was hot and not a cloud in the sky. The pidgeys were fighting over a fallen oran berry while plenty more hung in the tree. Eevee watched intently at the pokemon battle as he has never been in one before, the way they readied their attacks and the attempts at dodging which only the odd time would work. Eventually the pokemon would get so worked up battling over this berry, the pokemon would forget what started the battle in the first place. Never even realized that the sly little Eevee would already have it half eaten by the time one was knocked out, and that their efforts rendered useless. the Eevee never needed to battle as he doesn't have any territory to defend or any reason to fight over one berry if there is plenty more in the tree ready to fall and he was too afraid aswell. But there was one thing this little Eevee would do routinely, play with his human friend. A trainer named bob, only 13 years and had blonde short hair with blue eyes, he would come every day and play with eevee and some times have little games with the Eevee to work up its confidence. But for the last week he hasn't showed up. Eevee thought that Bob didn't like him anymore so ventured into town for his first time in months looking for him. lurking behind garbage cans and bushes at every turn or human that would pass Eevee eventually arrived at the school, several minutes pass and loud chime goes off sending the little Eevee scurring away. hesitantly approaching the school looking for away in he starts walking the perimeter of the school hoping to find and open window, and sure enough on the side of the school was an open window above the garbage cans. leaping on to the garbage cans to peer inside for any humans eevee notices a lot of pictures of pokemon all over the tables, some were only half done. he leaps in jumping on all the desks and chairs looking at all the different pokemon. some he knew, some he didnt and some looked like it was fused with two other pokemon. carrying on and strolling around the school trying to pick up his friends scent through all the other random scents, a loud shrilling scream echoes all over the school making Eevees fur stand on ends. Eevee continues on cautiously looking for Bob and for where that hoarded scream came from, hoping to find Bob first of course.
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Post by naito-kun on Jan 4, 2007 18:28:56 GMT -5
CHAPTER 2 THE KEY eevee runs to the door and try's to openit. it was locked he runs around the school into class rooms and closets. he finds the boys wash room and walks in there jumps on the toilet and steps on the handel not knowing what it would do. it flushes and eevee runs out of the boys wash room runs down the hall up the stairs in the jaintors closet right in to a wall. the keys get knock of the shelf and hits him in the head. he picks up the keys and runs not knowing where hes going. he go in to the girls wash room this time walks in to the stall see the toilet. eevee runs down the stair in terrior trips and falls, flings the keys while hes falling. he gets up and limps up the stairs looking for the keys. he couldn't find them so he go back down carefully then walks in to the hall way. eevee looks for the keys and see them hanging on a coat hook. eevee jumps but can barely reach the key. he walks into the closes room witch was down a couple stairs and finds a small wooden stool and he push out of the room looks up the stairs. he starts climbing the stairs but before he get to the top he loses grip on the stool. he does this a couple times and then reaches the top of the stairs .he pushes the stool under the keys. eevee jumps hit his head off the coat hook trying to get the keys. he tries again gets a hold of the keys and hangs there and lets go. "maybe i should knock it off the hook instead" eevee says softly he jumps and hits his head againreally hard "OW" eevee yells. the keys got knock off and the kidnappers heard the eevee call. thought some one came hear and they run out of the gym to search the place. eevee runs into the closes room and hides behind a box of books in the closet
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Post by naito-kun on Jan 4, 2007 19:10:16 GMT -5
CHAPTER 3 THE RESCUE the kid napper looked in the closet eevee look out the side just enough to see the person he was wearing a mask on his face and a black out fit with a red dragonite on it. then the guy left, eevee looks in the hall and sees nobody so he runs up and down the stairs around corners until he finds the gym. eevee goes to the door he jump but missed the handel he jumps and jumps he gets the key in the hole. it not enough in the hole so he jump and hit the key in all the way he jumps and gets a grip and turns his head the door become unlocked. the key slips out of the handel and the door opens there was no kid nappers becuase they where still searching eevee saw bob tied up in a group of people. eevee runs and chews through the rope, bob and the rest of the group untied the rest of the other groups. then every body surrounded eevee and thanked eevee. they where trying to escape, until the kidnapper came back and they took of the masks and one said "we will be back the red dragonites we will get you we all ready have the rest of the town". then they left "what do they want with us" bob ask his freind witch was on the other side of the room when she was tied up. "i heard them say that they need about 50 more people to revive the most powerful pokemon it was a red dragonite it had lived for thousands of years they said that it was born like that, then the people sealed it away" says his friend "why would you seal up the most powerful pokemon" says bob "i don't know it might of got to wild" says his friend. "but i thought dragonite where freindly not agressive" says bob "remember what i said before it's not like any normal dragonite it was a red one " says his freind.
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Jan 5, 2007 15:34:24 GMT -5
i like it naito-kun! ^-^ and i think i thought of a name! how about: "Eevee and the Red Dragonite".....i cant wait for more!
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Post by naito-kun on Jan 5, 2007 21:20:47 GMT -5
CHAPTER 4 THE BLUE PIKACHU? he sees one of his other friends and walks over to see how he was. " heard them say that they need a dragon scale and dragon fang for dna to revive some thing" says his freind "it a red dragonite" say bob "it's a red what a red dragonite i though they were orange"? says his freind "not this one see ya later" says bob "bye bob" say his freind bob heads by the oran tree with eevee but to there surpise they see a blue pikachu eating the oran berries that fell to the ground. "i hope this is not one of those pokemon that is really powerful and goes insane"says bob eevee walks up to the pikachu they start talking leaving bob not knowing what there really doing. bob asks eevee what the pikachu's name is eevee runs to a oran berry and picks it up and brings it to bob. "eevee is the pikachu's name oran" bob asks eevee shakes his head to say no and bites bobs blue jeans "eevee is it jean" eevee shakes it head agian eevee pokes the pikachu "is it pikachu" asked bob eevee shakes it head and pokes the pikachu agian "i know it's a blue pikachu"says bob eevee jumps around like he got it right. "what eevee is the pikachu's name blue hey that's cool blue the pikachu it suits you really have a good name blue"says bob blue and eevee run off and start chasing each other around the tree and bob sits down to think about what the team said "the entire town gone but us, i better get home and see for my self, eevee and blue want to come to my house" bob asks they nodd there heads and walk with bob to bob's house they walk in side a see they house was toren apart scratch marks every where and burn marks on the walls. "where could they take th-them it can't be this far"bob says softly to blue and eevee. bob walks to the kitchen to make some food for them he gets 2 bowls of food and gives it to eevee and blue he takes every thing out of his book bag and puts in 2 thin blankets and put enough food to fill the bag and leaves room for a couple potions that his dad has from his battles with trainers that he hasn't used.
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Jan 5, 2007 21:24:32 GMT -5
i liked when bob was trying to guess the pikachus name! ^-^ "its name is oran?"
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Post by naito-kun on Jan 5, 2007 21:28:30 GMT -5
i will try to get the next chapter up tomorow but i have to go bye
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Jan 5, 2007 21:29:00 GMT -5
aww! bye! cant wait for the next stuff!
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Post by koneko on Jan 6, 2007 16:21:31 GMT -5
i like it. ^-^ good job naito-kun. *clapp clapp*
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Post by naito-kun on Jan 6, 2007 17:58:14 GMT -5
CHAPTER 5 THE ONLY ONE they waited til the next day to start so they could get some rest and think of where to look. they got up around noon so they went out side and saw the red dragonites waiting for them and behind them was every body that the caught today witch was everybody but them. bob walks out and yells "why do you need every body from this town why do you use your on people!" "because your people have never left this village for a 100 year am i right" says one guy "well yeah but no one ever needed to and it is a peaceful town until now but what's that have to do with that"bob replies "you ansestor seal the dragonite away"the guy says "so we don't know how to unlock" bob says "you don't need to know we just need the one with the blood of the one who seal the dragonite and 2000 people to regain his strenght we need the one who's ansestor was Hiro the dragon trainer " says the guy " what made him seal him away"bob says "we think because it became to powerful annd agressive but it wasn't always like that, it was made fun of all the time and Hiro tried to get them to stop but they didn't the thing is it was Hiro's best freind" the red dragonite's left bob was to shock to do anything after what he heard "h-he sealed a-away his best friend"bob says sadly "how could y-you are m-my great great grandfather"bob says while shaking he realize they left and not to far so he follows them quitely with blue and eevee hiding behind and in trashcans, bushes and trees. they find there base and he sees a cave and decides to explore in it. when he reaches the cave it had markings about a dragonite attacking people and the rest of the picture was worn off. he walks a little bet farther in and read was what he seen on a stand "awaken great red beasts"bob says "what that supose to me do you know eevee, blue" blue and eevee shakes there head
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Jan 6, 2007 18:59:04 GMT -5
gasp! shocking!
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Post by naito-kun on Jan 7, 2007 18:39:38 GMT -5
CHAPTER 6 THE RED DRAGONS then 2 members of the red dragonites spot bob "hey catch that kid" the guy says they run up to him and see that he is reading the book "hey kid you can read that book "yeah it not to hard"bob says "but we couldn't how can you"says the guy "well at first it was up side down"bob says the 2 people look at each other and start crying"we are so pathitic"they say while sucking there thumbs. bob,blue and eevee start laughing at them but then a earth quake starts up and the gaurds start hugging each other while wimpering in the corner of the room, the sealed wall crumbled to show 5 different dragon pokemon all the members of team red dragonite come running in in the right top corner a red salamance beside it was the red dragonite next in the left top corner a red flygon and in front it was red aerodactyl beside it was a red gyardos. "th-theres more"bob says the red dragonites look around the room. then all of the dragons wake up from there slumber and fly out of the cave. bob looks at the next page of the book and says " out side of this town they can't be" they runs out side and watch the dragons try to go out of the towns boarder and run into a barrier they get angry and started reckoning ever thing in the town "but why do we need 2000 people to regain there strenght" bob read on it the book "when awaken the great beasts will need 2000 people to be at the strongest" the guy says "th-their strongest th-that means oh no we got to seal them away" bob flips the page"they can't be sealed agian the only way to stop them is to brake the curse" "wh-what curse" the guy says bob reads "the dragons seal where the protectors of a temple under the water, the temple of dragons"
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Jan 8, 2007 20:16:28 GMT -5
oo! temple of dragons! can i just ask something of you. could you use a little more puncuation and captial letters and stuff. just so its easier to read?
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Post by nightmare the on Feb 28, 2007 20:35:28 GMT -5
"there was supose to be one dragon but there is five what happend" bob says "our translator lost his glasses he is 60 years old"says the guy. "like i said the book was up side down to 2 other people" says bob. "oh that's why he read up side down we thought he was crazy"say the guy
this the bottom part of chapter 6 (to small to call a chapter)
who ever wants to contiune this fic go a head i'm not stopping you i'm fresh out of idea's
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Mar 1, 2007 18:23:06 GMT -5
maybe you just need a little break. writers craps are awful
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