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Post by Blue the Pikachu on May 13, 2007 12:11:37 GMT -5
what ever xcat..what ever
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Post by xcat2 on May 13, 2007 19:07:41 GMT -5
So what you are saying is you don't like my fiction? I didn't remember to mention my fiction story is already on chapter 7.
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Post by naito-kun on Aug 19, 2007 21:05:20 GMT -5
tea break over (finally) CHAPTER 7 THE CAVE they went back to the book and started reading it agian, as they read the book they discovered that there is a cavern close to where they were. bob, eevee and blue decide to check it out, as they were about to leave one of the guards gave a key to bob "whats this for"bob ask gurad replied "you are the only one who can save the town folk, there in our trucks you should find them on your way to the cavern". as bob, blue and eevee finally leave they look into the sky and seen the 4 dragons smashing the barrier and the gyardos smashing it from the water. they took this as an chance to run there. while they were running to cavern looking for the trucks they heard screaming, so they take a look and it's was the town folk in the truck as they unlock the door their screams of terrior grew louder and louder. bob swing the door the town folk lets out one terrible screach. "hello, is everyone all right" bob asks. the town's folks here the voice of bob they start to calm mayor "no b-bob a-are you all right w-we though y-you had died" bob tells the story to everyone and says bye to them. bob blue and eevee run for 10 mins and finally reachs the cavern and look back at the dragons still pounding on the barrier. there was a sign on the side of the cavern sign say this way to the under sea temple of dragons, the cave of forgotten temple
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Post by naito-kun on Aug 20, 2007 11:41:16 GMT -5
CHAPTER 8 THE FINAL STAND they enter the cave they walk for a little over a half an hour. then they make it to a sealed door with writing on it. "they who breaks the curse saves thee world" bob says it out loud. it seal door open up and there was a statue of a dragon pokemon palkia it had writing on the ground in front of it. " it said the one who speaks it's true name may break the curse on it to save the 5 curse dragons it's true name is galaxia" as bob read this to blue and eevee the statue started to glow and palkia bursted through the celling. water started pouring in blasting blue bob and eevee through the cave of the forgotten temple. bob eevee and blue slowly get up and look to the sky galaxia uses aura sphere. a big blast destroys the barrier and the are dragons completely notout. a couple hour later the dragons regain there normal color back and wakeup. the dragons became the protector of the town they almost destroyed. team red dragonite dispute and help rebuild what ever they destroyed and lives in the town they almost destroyed with the dragons. rebuild the temple it broke with it's powers and now it rests here for now bob eevee and blue became the best of friends they alway hang out and play by the oran tree.
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Post by xcat2 on Aug 20, 2007 14:51:46 GMT -5
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Aug 21, 2007 18:30:58 GMT -5
was that the end of the fanfic?
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Post by naito-kun on Aug 21, 2007 19:31:26 GMT -5
for now ;D who know's i might add more
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Post by naito-kun on Aug 22, 2007 20:55:54 GMT -5
[shadow=red,left,300][glow=red,2,300]EXTRA CHAPTER 1 A NEW BEGINING[/glow][/shadow] a couple months later bob blue and eevee were playing at the tree as they were playing images were going through his head. it play was going over and over "what was the main reason great great grandpa hiro seal away his friends". bob told blue and eevee that he was going to the shrine (was the cave with the book) they left for to see if they can find anything more out . once they reached there the started to read the rest of the book. "the great dragons were seal away by a curse of redsork witch would drive the lifeforms crazy, changing there appreance and turn them to stone in seven days, as they read on of how the town got the name redstone they came across a section that said not only the dragons got sealed away something else did to" "he who speaks these words can unlock the seal chamber of it, AWAKEN GREAT RULER OF THE DRAGONS" a wall start to move in the chamber were the dragon slept. bob, blue and eevee walk in and see a statue a great big statue right in the middle of the room
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Aug 23, 2007 18:43:16 GMT -5
dun dun DUN
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Post by naito-kun on Aug 24, 2007 14:50:31 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300][shadow=red,left,300]EXTRA CHAPTER 2 THE STATUE[/shadow][/glow]
the statue was bob's great great grandpa hiro as they were moving closer the statue started to shine. eevee blue and bob moved back as they did the statue fell to pieces and it show hiro in the same postion as his normal size. hiro started to regian a red colour . hiro started to move to them laughing at them like an lonatic. another barrier went up it was bigger than the other. eevee bob and blue thought it was time to leave, bob pick up the book as they leave they ran all the way to the temple to alert the dragons. once the dragons were alert they atemp to stop hiro enough for bob could read the book, bob started reading the book "the only ways to break the curse on the ruler is to get to redsork and take him to the shrine or kill him. once cured the dragon and the ruler can finally rest in peace once agian that is the reason the barrier is larger, redsork is east of redstone" bob eevee and blue catch up with the dragons and find the laying on the ground wipe out bob says "we must alert galaxia" they run back to the temple and summon galaxia
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Sept 9, 2007 13:31:48 GMT -5
gasp! things are getting intesence!
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Post by naito-kun on Sept 25, 2007 20:19:28 GMT -5
[shadow=red,left,300][glow=red,2,300]EXTRA CHAPTER 3 [/glow][/shadow]as they arrive galaxia was on the ground knock out and cave is completely full of water
as hiro walk away here started to gain more powerful "what is happening to grandpa?" bob says in a squeky voice as hiro became more powerful the time to save grew slim they had only one thing they could do "blue and eevee we need to destroy him, but we need every body please see if you can get the other dragons if they are all right" bob said in tears
blue and eevee ran off, they came back a little while later with all the dragons exept dragonite
"were is dragonite blue" bob asks worried blue bows her head down "still knock out blue" bob replies blue nodds her head "okay we need you all to use the most powerful move you know"
blue uses thunder, galaixa uses aura sphere and the rest use hyper beam on hiro "still not enough we really need dragonite"bob whispers to himself eevee runs off to try everything to awaken dragonite
as eevee arrives to dragonite it awakes and starts to fly where the explosion is til eevee calls to dragonite, dragonite stops to pick eevee up and eevee explains every to dragonite
as they arrive every one is badly wounded from the battle with the unhuman like powers coming from hiro
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Post by naito-kun on Sept 27, 2007 17:54:46 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300][shadow=blue,left,300]EXTRA CHAPTER 4 THE FINAL CHANCE[/shadow][/glow]
as they looked around hiro was hovering to direction of redsork "why is he heading that way, is he planning on get back at them for the curses?" bob says to everyone
as the group arrives to redsork it is completely torn done with hiro in the town sqaure every one was panicking because of the uncontrollable power coming from hiro
"everyone this our final chance you must give it everything you left you can give to kill him" bob says to them in a serious voice
as the dragons and blue hit him with everything they can dragonite was still feeling the effects of hiro and couldn't seem to do anything
they where over powered by hiro
"NOW GIVE EVERY THING YOU GOT!!!"
every one uses the last of what they have then dragonite flies into a really close range and uses the last of his power on the final hyper beam
there was a expolsion and everyone was knock out
once they awoken in what ever was left of the hospital they couldn't seem to find dragonite
"exuse me doctor but where is dragonite" bob asks "sorry sir, dragonite didn't make it through the blast he was to close to the man that exploded"
everyone was so shock for the longest time
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Sept 27, 2007 18:07:31 GMT -5
dragonite died? TT_TT thats so sad.
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Post by naito-kun on Sept 28, 2007 19:04:27 GMT -5
the final chapter finally ;D everyone proply like finally 2 ;D
[shadow=lime green,left,300][glow=red,2,300]EXTRA CHAPTER 5 THE FALLEN WARRIORS[/glow][/shadow] as they left the hospital they where stop by the mayor "where do you think you going you just destroyed our town" he said they just kept walking "HEY I WAS TALKING TO YOU!!!!" she screeches at them
by the bob finally snap "your telling us we completely destroy your town you guys are dumd enough to put curses on people hey now i have lost my grandfather and my friend dragonite BECAUSE YOU GUYS ARE FOOLISH ENOUGH TO USE CURSES"
they leave for home and build a shine in honor of the fallen warriors inscripted on them was this
hiro the final curse dragonite the last of hope
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