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Post by Slipomatic on Nov 18, 2007 21:54:07 GMT -5
wow i never wrote that many chapters i think the furthest i've written was maybe 16 chapters for one and maybe another 18 chapters for another...
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Nov 19, 2007 16:50:16 GMT -5
oh yeah, fireblade-kun's fanfic are that long + LONGER! ^-^ its ok fireblade-kun...writers block ix terrible!
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Post by Slipomatic on Nov 19, 2007 20:29:30 GMT -5
you know its only a matter of time before i really decide to post a fan-fic maybe its the suspense
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Nov 19, 2007 20:34:17 GMT -5
and we are all waiting on the edges of our compy seats till you post it! ^-^
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Post by firebladex2 on Nov 19, 2007 21:07:07 GMT -5
for the most part
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Post by Slipomatic on Nov 19, 2007 21:09:32 GMT -5
lol i'll post it maybe tomorrow or wed i'm to evil to post it today but i'll go ahead and post some random prologue that isn't meant to be a story (one shot stuff, but only a prologue)
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Dec 1, 2007 7:35:03 GMT -5
and i will post a chapter soon! i havent been able to get on the computer that much lately, so i havent been able to write! but i did come up with another mini fanfic idea, for after my next Rina instalment, which will be tied to this story, but not be a sequel. i dont wanna give too much away now, but you will find out when the time comes! it even has a stupid little title to go with it! XD
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Dec 3, 2007 20:16:11 GMT -5
Chapter 15
The bright white light from the balls faded to reveal Vine and a Prinplup. Vine’s muscles began to tense, ready for battle, and upon seeing that, the Prinplup began to laugh.
“So this is my nave of an opponent? Pity, for this is going to be a short match.” His voice had a snobbish air to it, like you would expect from some snooty spoiled kid.
“Yeah, short for you!” Vine roared, sending a Vine Whip Prinplup’s way. He successfully entwined the snob, trapping its wings tightly against its feathery body. This just made the Pokemon laugh more.
“If this is the best you can do, then I don’t even want to fight you. But since my lady commands me, the fight will end soon.” The edges of his wings glowed silver, and began to cut at the vines. Once he broke free, Prinplup charged at Vine, his wings crossed ready to strike with Steel Wing.
Vine easily dodged the frontal attack, but didn’t see the next one coming. Prinplup had feinted with Steel Wing, but went in with Peck; which hit Vine dead on. “You sure are sly, you stupid flightless bird Pokemon!” Vine scoffed from the ground. He easily got back up, and began to shake the leaves on his back.
“Razor leaf, eh?” Prinplup laughed again. “Honestly, are you fighting your hardest? If you aren’t, then there is no way you can hope to defeat me!” Vine’s Razor Leaf flew at Prinplup, who deflected them with Iron Defense. “Now whiteness the power of a true attack!” Now, both of Prinplup’s wings began to glow white, it was Wing Attack.
“Get out of there Vine!” Ally shouted into the battle, but Vine didn’t seem to respond, he just stood there watching Prinplup come in to attack. A hit like this might cause Vine to faint, and the battle would go on.
From where Blue was sitting, she could see why Vine wasn’t moving. There was a look of sheer fear in his eyes, and his whole body was shaking. Ally was standing behind him, so she couldn’t see how terrified he was.
“VINE!” Blue shouted, snapping him back into reality. “You can take this guy! Just focus, and think your moves through!” Upon hearing her words, Vine just stared at her, and then took them to heart. After giving her a smile, Vine glared back at Prinplup, who was almost inched away from him.
“It doesn’t matter if you are just now going all out, this battle is over!” Prinplup sneered as he took aim. Prinplup then closed his eyes for all of two seconds, but when he opened them, Vine had disappeared. Before he realized he was gone, Prinplup had begun to swing, and lost his balance. Now was the time to strike.
On the other end of the battle field, Vine had begun to gather sunlight into the bud on his back. He was going to use SolarBeam on Prinplup while he was caught off guard. The only downfall was the time it took SolarBeam to be prepared. Prinplup just stood there, staring at where Vine had been for a few moments, and then regained his focus on the battle. Without those seconds, Vine might not have been able to pull SolarBeam off.
Prinplup swirled around to see Vine charging, and laughed insanely. “You think you can hit me with SolarBeam? What a bad move! While you are charging, I can hit you with a final Wing Attack, and it will be all over!” His wings shone bright white again, and he ran towards Vine.
The light Vine had been charging was now visible above his bud. With the charging over, Vine could now launch the attack. Although he had seen the light, Prinplup kept running, with this insane look on his face all the while.
“Too late buddy! You just lost this match!” Vine said, grinning evilly. With that, Vine fired SolarBeam at Prinplup. He was engulfed in the light, and everyone watching the battle had to shield their eyes while the attack was going on. Once the light faded, Prinplup was laying on his back on the ground, defeated.
“You did it!” Blue cheered, as she ran onto the battle field, hugging Vine when she got there. Back on the sidelines, Chatty lowered his head in shame, his trainer had been defeated, and so had his comrades. Ally and Mirror then joined them on the platform, followed by an enraged Mary, and an impressed Matt.
“That was an amazing battle Ally.” Matt said, putting his hand on her shoulder. He then turned to Mary and smiled. “You and your Prinplup were really good out there too! Your Staravia was so fast, and would have beaten Ally’s Mirror if it hadn’t evolved.”
Mary’s face turned red after he finished talking. “You really think so Matt?” Her rage had faded away into joy, unlimited joy that the one man she loved acknowledged her skill. She felt so good, she could die!
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That night, the three of them had dinner together (along with Blue). After eating dinner, they stayed out almost until midnight talking, and watching other battles, that once they went back to their room, Ally and Blue went strait to sleep. The next morning, the ship had reached the Battle Frontier, which was Ally and Blue’s stopped. Matt and Mary were going a bit farther, so it was time for them to part. Mary still was slightly jealous of Ally, but after the night before, they had become better friends. After they watched the ship sail away, Ally and Blue turned their focus on the Frontier.
“So, we finally made it here.” Ally said, in awe of how amazing the Battle Frontier looked. She had never been their herself, even though Lucy worked here, but she was excited to finally be standing in it.
“Yeah, things are going to get pretty interesting.” Blue said softly.
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Post by firebladex2 on Dec 4, 2007 21:22:34 GMT -5
I really liked it, it seems like Mary is a bit bi-polar though
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Dec 20, 2007 18:47:02 GMT -5
would everyone be terribly upset if i stopped writing Yellow Version: Special Blue Edition? personally, i dont find writing this type of fanfic as enjoyable as writing my Rina fanfic, even though i have the story all planned out. i just cant bring myself to write a chapter. if i do end it (which seems possible) i wont leave you guys hanging, i will post a summary of the rest of the fanfic (it wasnt going to be TOO much longer anyway). what do ya think?
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Post by Slipomatic on Dec 24, 2007 16:07:05 GMT -5
lol it would dismay if you were to quit writing it but someone might take your fan-fic and write a sequel to it perhaps like me j/k but i could see someone with your permission actually write a sequel to it. while the fan-fic may not be the easiest one to write, the ones that come easily to you are the fan-fics you focus until you're done. The ones that you have a harder time trying to come up with something or just don't feel like writing the chapter can wait until you have more time to focus on it. But i wouldn't quit unless it either goes no where or is just confusing
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Dec 27, 2007 9:01:32 GMT -5
i do have the rest of the story all planned out, i just havent posted it here! ^0^ besides, i dont think i would let anyone write a sequel to it, how it ends, it kinda ties everything up and well...i dunno if i want any sequals to it. soon i should have the summary posted. this fanfic wasnt going to be too much longer anyway
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Jan 5, 2008 13:55:17 GMT -5
FANFIC SUMMARY
Once Blue and Ally meet up with Noland and Lucy, the older two discover that they can also understand Pokemon, thanks to Blue’s wish from Jirachi. After about a day or two, Blue begins to feel something strange coming from one of the Battle facilities in the Frontier, so she goes out one afternoon to find out what it is. Upon entering the Battle Dome and journeying through it to the top (unseen by anyone there) she ends up in Tucker’s office. Tucker is there at the time, and tells Blue that he is the one who had her turned into a pikachu. There is a large crystal like rock in the room, which begins to glow, and reveal Jirachi. A while ago, Tucker saved Jirachi’s live, making the wish granting Pokemon indebted to him. After explaining how he wants to get back at Noland for being the object of Lucy’s affection (not knowing that they grew up together) he then wishes for Blue to become…well…the color blue (hence, a blue pikachu). Tucker then gets paged because he has a match to go to, so he sends out his Swampert to get rid of Blue. Some how, Ally, Noland, and Lucy find out Blue is there, and with Vine Ally defeats the Swampert. They leave the Dome, and Blue tells them what happened. She is worn out from the battle with the water and ground type, so they decide to take her to a Pokemon center. Noland suggests that Ally capture Blue, seeing as how she is a blue Pikachu, and that if she isn’t careful, some other trainer could do the same. Noland then gives Ally a Premier Ball, and she sneaks up behind Blue and raises the ball above her head. Blue turns around and sees that Ally has a Pokeball, and runs for it. Noland and Lucy send out two of their Pokemon (a Rhydon and a Seviper) and all five of them case Blue around the Frontier. After a chase, Blue collapses of exhaustion, and almost falls off of a building. Doing the only thing she could to save her, Ally throws the ball, captures Blue, and rushes her to a Pokemon Center. Three hours pass until Blue wakes up and then shuns Ally, because she believes Ally only caught her because of her rare color. Ally come in to visit her, and then explains why she really did it, and then shows her the ball. Noland went out and got the Knowledge Symbol (his facilities symbol) in graved on the white and red sphere.
They stay at the BF for about a month, just living with their siblings, when one day Ally gets a call from their friend, Adam. He has just made it into the Pokemon League, and wants her and Blue to join him at the league head quarters. Blue and Ally say good bye to their brother and sister, and get on the next train to Kanto. Once they arrive, they find the fastest way from Vermillion city to the league is through Diglett’s cave. On their way through, Vine evolves into a Venusaur while protecting them from the many Diglett and Dugtrio living there. They go through the Viridian Forrest, and shortly make it to the head quarters, and meet up with Adam. Ally then explains that Blue has turned into a Pikachu, which he doesn’t believe at first. Blue and Ally sit on the sidelines, and watch Adam win battle after battle, amazed at how strong his Pokemon, especially his Blastoise Hydro. In his last battle, before the semifinals, Adam faces Matt in a six on six battle. It is a close battle, which ends in a tie, leading to a sudden death fight the next day. Ally and Blue meet up with Mary, who they sit with at the 1 on 1 match the following day. Matt ends up winning, making Mary go into a fit of joy.
After the battles, Adam sticks with Ally and Blue as they travel around the Jhoto region. Adam doesn’t enter the Jhoto league, so the three can focus on their adventures. Mirror evolves into a Pidgeot after battling a swarm of Noctowl’s and Hoothoots, and Ally captures a Lapras. They journey around for months, and at the end, Ally and Adam have different goals they want to go after. Ally wants to go back to Kanto and try her luck at the league, will Adam wants to head north and explore Sinnoh. Blue is torn between the two, so she makes up her mind to go her own way as well. She decides that she wants to become even stronger and tells them that she could never chose one of them over the other.
Five years pass, and Blue is known around the world as the blue pikachu that cannot be caught. She fights battle after battle whenever trainers see her, and no one has been able to defeat her. Once word of her appearance near a Hoenn town is reported at the local Pokemon Center, two older and more powerful trainers rise to the challenge. The two fight together and face the living legend with a Blaziken and a Swampert. It is a long battle, but Blue again gets over powered by the Swampert, and the girl of the two throws a Pokeball, and captures the Pikachu. Then the two mysteriously vanish. When the girl lets Blue out of the ball, the pikachu attempts to attack her, enraged that Ally might have let her go. She then realizes that the two trainers are Ally and Adam, and that they are glad they have finally found her. They also explain how they have gotten jobs as Noland and Lucy’s successors at the Battle Frontier. The three of them head back to the Frontier and live there. From time to time, some trainers come to fight Ally, the Pike Queen, knowing that she captured the blue pikachu, and want to battle that. Unknown to them, they are facing off against live long friends, and don’t stand a chance!
^-^ Thank you for reading! This is the summarized ending of Yellow Version: Special Blue Edition. I hope you enjoyed it!
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Post by Slipomatic on Jan 5, 2008 20:18:47 GMT -5
pretty hefty summary XD well time to check on my soup before it overflows
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Post by Blue the Pikachu on Jan 5, 2008 20:30:25 GMT -5
*bows* sorry to end it like this, but i really really want to get on with my Rina story. i hope you enjoyed the ending though...as well as the fanfic in general. ^-^ thanks for reading!
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